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Please be nice or I will cry....

Word Count: 300
Rating: extremely innocent;)

A/N: This is a fic written for the 'Hiccups' Challenge over at slip_it_in_J2,
garvaldmains looked it over for me, told me she liked it and posted it at her LJ first, because I was to much of a chicken to post it myself…..turned out that people liked it, so now I’m posting it here;)


Jared's scream echoed through the house and startled Jensen.


Jensen ran towards the sound of Jared's voice coming from the kitchen.

"What is wrong?", he almost screamed himself looking at Jared's face, where tears were running down his cheeks.

"Look at him", Jared cried, pointing at Harley on the floor and slumping down beside the dog "he is dying, Jen!!"

Jensen turned and looked at Harley, the big dog lying on his side making a small noise, followed by odd twitches running through his body every so often.

At first Jensen just stared at the dog, then he bent down touching his fur, Jared still sobbing beside him.

Jensen tried to listen to the sounds the dog made which turned out to be hard, as Jared was rambling on and on: "He is having a heart attack, Jen, a heart attack, we need to get him to the vet".

Jensen looked at Harley once again making sure that he got the diagnosis right and then turned to Jared.

"Jared", he said, his voice calm, "look at me".

Jared did as he was told and Jensen put his hands on Jared's face brushing his thumbs over the tears on Jared's cheeks. "Harley is not having a heart-attack", he said, "he has hiccups".

Jared starred at him for a minute, "what??"

"He probably ate his food too fast", Jensen said and smiled at Jared "then he got hiccups",

"So maybe I overreacted?" Jared asked quietly.

"Maybe just a little, but that is why you are such a great doggie-daddy", Jensen answered.

Jared blushed and Jensen pulled him into a hug, looking down at Harley who still jumped slightly on the spot with every hiccup.




( 25 comments — Leave a comment )
Jan. 25th, 2009 11:12 am (UTC)
Well done for posting babes!!

*hugs you* xx
Jan. 25th, 2009 11:20 am (UTC)
awwww thanks hon,
with out your kind words I would never have had the currage;)
Jan. 25th, 2009 11:39 am (UTC)
That was yours?????
Oh wow I read that yesterday and I meant to comment, I think I forgot to though cause I'm an idiot and wow that is such a cute story!! It was awesome and funny and wow...well done you!!!
Jan. 25th, 2009 11:42 am (UTC)
That was mine!!!!
Thank you so much for your kind words, it means a lot coming from a great writer like you♥
So glad you liked it.
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Jan. 25th, 2009 12:29 pm (UTC)
*sighs in relief*
Thanks my little Får, I´m sooo happy you like it.
I´ve never written J2 before, and even if it comletely innocent I was so nervous about it;)
When I was a kd we had a dog the used to get hiccups because he swollowed his food to fast, and the first time he did it, my dad thought he was having a heart attack;)
And Jared is just way to cute like that♥
♥hugs and kisses♥
Jan. 25th, 2009 01:11 pm (UTC)
Awwwwww!! This is just so cute!
And I so understand Jared oo I'd be totally freaked out!
And Jensen is just so a hero ÖÖ
Jan. 25th, 2009 01:20 pm (UTC)
Oh thank you sweetie, I´m so happy you like it♥
I´m not used to write you know so I was sooo nervous if you`d like it.
Jared would freak like that wouldn`t he, and then Jen would be his hero and save the day;)
Jan. 25th, 2009 01:59 pm (UTC)
I know you're always scared about your writing but I always love what you're writing! Always!♥
And I'm just so happy when I can read you♥
Jan. 25th, 2009 06:07 pm (UTC)
I´m so lucky to have you to keep me going;)
Jan. 25th, 2009 01:35 pm (UTC)
Awww! That was so sweet, i can imagine them with Harley there.
Jan. 25th, 2009 05:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you, I´m so happy you like it...
I think it was sweet too;)
Jan. 25th, 2009 03:13 pm (UTC)
Awww this was so cute and sweet:D

Well done and I'm pleased you decided to post it yourself.

Jan. 25th, 2009 06:04 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much honey,
I´m so so happy that you like it;)

I adore my new icon♥
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Jan. 25th, 2009 06:06 pm (UTC)
Thank you thank you thank you♥
I´m so happy you like it, I haven`t written much before so that is why I was so nervous;)
♥love you and miss youuuuuuuuuu sooo much♥
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Jan. 25th, 2009 07:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you thank you thank you♥♥
for you sweet and kind words, they mean soooo much coming from a great writer like you...
I was so nervous as I had never written any J2 before, so I´m so happy tht you like it.

♥hugs and kisses and loves you toooo♥
Jan. 26th, 2009 01:02 pm (UTC)
Jan. 26th, 2009 01:33 pm (UTC)
Jan. 28th, 2009 03:55 pm (UTC)
I loved that little ficcy ♥
Jan. 28th, 2009 04:27 pm (UTC)
That was me!!!!!

Thank you sooooo much;)
I´ve never written J2 before, just a little Harry Potter and Smallville and not many people have seen, so I was very shy about my writing.
I`m so happy you liked it...

Maybe I´ll be more brave in the future and post my stories;)

Feb. 8th, 2009 12:32 pm (UTC)
Den var herlig! Meget søt historie...

*klemmer på dig*
Feb. 8th, 2009 07:12 pm (UTC)
Åhh tak skal du have.
Jeg var så nervøs for at poste den;)
Mar. 6th, 2009 06:33 pm (UTC)
Awww poor Harley, and poor Jared. Glad it was just a case of the hiccups though :)
Mar. 6th, 2009 06:56 pm (UTC)
Yeah poor puppies;)
Thanks for reading and glad you liked it.
Mar. 6th, 2009 07:10 pm (UTC)
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