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I think you all know my own personal little "renascence woman", my niece Sarah;
She asked for your help yesterday and I promised to pass it on. so if you will take five minutes to take a look I would be very grateful...


Sarah says; I am 13 years old and would love to write a novel, here’s the plot;


It is set in early 1800…
A young English girl at 19 years old is getting employed at a rich old man around 60 and his wife. The live in a big mansion and she should stay there for 6 months and live in the mansion too.
She starts snooping around a little, discovering things about the man and the wife, by listening through the keyholes. She hears that the wife will leave the man and that the man has financial problems.
Some time after the wife leaves, the girl falls in love with the young Gartner, and they enjoy each others company during breaks and stuff.
One day the Gartner get picked up by the police, as the old man says he has stolen some valuables from the mansion, and is to be beheaded (I think that can be the punishment at that time)
She is grieving for some time, and something happens, and one day she hears through the keyhole that the old man is in love with her, and got rid of the Gartner so he could get her for himself.
Unable to keep that secret, she tells the Cook and Cook tells the Butler, which ends up telling the man.
Te old man and the girls have a long talk and they end up in bed.
The old man get in some trouble, and the girl helps as she has heard a lot through the keyhole.
At the end the man gets out of the trouble and the man and the girl gets married.

The title will be “What Carry Mcleen heard through the keyhole.”
As for a 60 year old man in bed with the young girl, I imagine that she might be a little in love with the man, and feels better by being loved back. Should I maybe make her 21 or 22 instead?
Does it sound any good) Help please.



So if you have any comments here, please let her know....

Comments

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sarmsank
Jul. 27th, 2013 04:37 pm (UTC)
I'm not sure of the age at the times of the 1800's of when a women gets involved with a much older man. I would try to look up on the internet and see if you get any hits. I believe at the time it was a very young age. But men didn't stay alive as long as they do now, that's something to consider. Find that out too. People had a much smaller life span back then.
pippii
Jul. 27th, 2013 06:36 pm (UTC)
Thanks hon,
Yes we spoke about it yesterday, and I told her I would help her look up all the time stuff online and in books.
♥hugs♥
deanvica23
Jul. 27th, 2013 05:00 pm (UTC)
In 1800 of young girls was married by theirs parents at of old gentlemen. So yes a girl of 18 can i think in this time 1800 to be married at a old man of this age.
pippii
Jul. 27th, 2013 06:37 pm (UTC)
Thanks Love,
we spoke about those things yesterday, and we will get more information from books and internet♥
Hugs
padamoosegirl
Jul. 27th, 2013 05:02 pm (UTC)
She should keep her at this age (or even, I would make her younger). People around that time used to date and marry much older men. I would love to read it. Would you send me a copy of it if it gets published? :)

Edited at 2013-07-27 05:03 pm (UTC)
pippii
Jul. 27th, 2013 06:40 pm (UTC)
Thanks honey, the age thing is what er talked about yesterday, and I think it is fine.
Sure, I´ll make sure you`ll get a copy.♥
Kisses
Love your icon, Dean found that book in Rorys purse before they fell asleep♥
padamoosegirl
Jul. 27th, 2013 06:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

If you have a minute, you can look this entry. It is my wish list for my birthday and Christmas. :)

Edited at 2013-07-27 07:00 pm (UTC)
tkeylasunset
Jul. 27th, 2013 06:09 pm (UTC)
This is a lovely premise for a book - mysterious, intriguing, lots of human drama!

I look forward to reading the whole thing when it is published!

Good luck, Sarah.
pippii
Jul. 27th, 2013 06:41 pm (UTC)
Thanks honey, I´ll let her know, she will be so happy♥
I´ll make sure you´ll get a copy♥
Hugs
honeyjojames
Jul. 27th, 2013 08:56 pm (UTC)
It sounds brilliant to me! Sarah is very clever to be thinking of writing a novel at only 13! It's a great plot, and I wish her the best of luck with it! ♥

*hugs you*
pippii
Jul. 28th, 2013 12:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you Darling, that is so nice of you. She´ll be so happy to know you like it;)
♥hugs♥
goldbandlily
Jul. 28th, 2013 02:24 pm (UTC)
Wow, I'm really impressed! The plot is really mature for a 13 years old girl (or I'm maybe not talking to enough young girls nowadays ^^), and it does look like Sarah gave a lot of thinking about it.

I wish her good luck, she has to carry on with her dream. :D
pippii
Jul. 29th, 2013 02:23 pm (UTC)
Thanks darling, I´m really pleased that you took time to comment here, it means a lot to her.
Yeah, it started with a dream she had, and then she thought it over, and we´ve talked a lot about it.
She is so happy that some real authors will give her comments.♥
Hugs
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