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HIYA kos_mos607

OMF…..G!

I have never seen the movie “Hostel” - but I checked it out on Imdb and those boys,,,GAAAAAAAAA…

I like some of Tarantinos movies, but I am weird that way; I am the only one I know, who likes “Reservoir Dogs” more than “Pulp Fiction” - I was not that impressed…
I watched the first volume of “Kill Bill” because my friend Brian made me - never got around to volume 2 -
I got really annoyed while watching “From dust to dawn”, `cause there are certain rules in killing vampires, and the movie broke those rules…That was enough for me to loose interest in the movie and just go on and on about the mistakes..
I love “Four Rooms” though and think the part with Tarantino is great…
Well enough of my babbling…..

This was GREAT::::::::::: And I am not just saying that because I love your stories ;)

I SO want to know what happens next…..(And not having seen the movie I would like to know what happened to Josh’s fingers…maybe like a short summary from the movie ????)

I found a few - very few - mistakes in the text itself. But I will not tell you, unless you want me to ;)

And I have to tell you one more thing; reading this story got me remembering:
First Stephen King: “The Running man” (Written as Richard Bachman) I loved that book very much…and second; A Danish movie about soldiers in Bosnia. In the movie one of the soldiers organize trips for “ordenary" people to come and kill people in a small village….I have not thought about that movie for years, but this story brought it right back…..

So all in all: I hope you can use my opinion;
AND I CAN`T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT..

Love
Annette

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kos_mos607
Apr. 15th, 2007 11:02 pm (UTC)
You have absoulty no idea how much I'm jumping out of my seat right now. I'm soo happy you liked it. I'm already on chapter 3 and I'll start posting them something this week. Now, I'll take a moment to answer your questions.

1)Yes the boys, GAAAAAHHHHHH!!!

2) Near the end of the movie Pax got taken like the rest of his friend's and lead to one of the chambers where some weird German guy tried to torture him but after a LOT of stressful moment, Pax managed to kill him and escape. During this time, the weirdo came after him a chainsaw (Once again, don't ask) and Pax kicked him and the guy dropped it or something (I wasn't watching this part I was covering my eyes) and in the process the saw cut off the ring and pinkly finger on his left hand. It sounds gory and it was, but I kinda like having that in my fic 'cause it reminds Paxton that he's a surviver or something, I plan on having lots of fun with.

3)Yeah I plan on sticking a small movie summery in there because I'm doing a full AU ending to the movie.

4)Any grammar mistakes, feel free to tell me, god knows I stick 'em everywhere. LOL

Thanks again hon, I was really worried it wouldn't go over too well because not a of people didn't like the movie. And let's face it, if you see fiction on a gory movie like Hostel everyone thinks all of the writing on it will be the same hack and slash gory junk.
pippii
Apr. 16th, 2007 07:55 am (UTC)
I am glad, that I can help you - I know I`ll be watching out for the fic!!!!

The movie sounds kind of gross, but I DO like the pictures of the boys that I have seen;)

Can`t wait to read more; so feel free to send me next chapter;)

kos_mos607
Apr. 16th, 2007 08:06 am (UTC)
I'm in the middle of proof reading chapter 2 at the moment and trying to get it the way I want it. I'll probably start posting chapters to these soon...

And yes the movie was REALLY graphic, the disturbing kind, but don't worry, I'm not going to make my chapters anything like that. It's gonna be more of a thriller genera, with Pax and Josh on the run from the company and what not.

And yes, teh boys...Rrrrr!!!

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pippii
Apr. 17th, 2007 08:05 am (UTC)
*trying hard to bring tongue back into mouth*
Lovely..............
Glad you´re not doing anything too graphic, I really don`t stomach that...
kos_mos607
Apr. 17th, 2007 08:19 am (UTC)
Me neither. Sometimes I really don't see the point to these movies (Hostel included) I like horror movies and stuff but lately all of the ones I've seen are lacking a solid story line so they just cover it up with gory scene and topless chicks. What happened to pride in workmanship you movie directors?
kos_mos607
Apr. 18th, 2007 02:30 am (UTC)
I have the new chapter ready, mind if I e-mail it to you?
pippii
Apr. 18th, 2007 08:05 am (UTC)
NOOOOO -
Please do!!!!!
kos_mos607
Apr. 18th, 2007 08:06 am (UTC)
Um okay, that's a yes right? Remember I'm a blonde.
pippii
Apr. 18th, 2007 08:17 am (UTC)
YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES............
pippii
Apr. 18th, 2007 09:49 am (UTC)
Bloody hell, Meg…

You actually made my cry into my coffee----
Poor Josh!!! I love the way Pax struggles with himself, when he realizes that he have to leave the other victims behind in order to save Josh.
This was brilliant; There is a great flow in the way you write, and I love the way U use brackets for thoughts…The same way as in TCR--love it there too….

I found a few errors hope you don`t mind me pointing that out ;)
But all in all - Bloody good chapter!!!! So please post it soon for our reading pleasure…
Love
Annette


The room was dimly lit and the air WITH thick with the stench of blood and something musky that Pax couldn’t name.

In the FAR corner of the room a figure was curled in a tight ball on the floor, nude and shaking.

Another small whimper came from Josh’s mouth as his ????????

Fearfully he moved his eyes down THE Josh’s body looking for more damage.

Fresh blood oozed out of the wound but not in a large amount so Paxton tried to ignore it as HE held Josh upright.

The floor the elevator was currently perched on was covered in a thick darkness that was (MADE IT) nearly impossible for him to see anything.

After what felt like a lifetime had PAST between the two men, Josh shakily pulled himself together enough to crawl towards his friend.

Pax’s VISION was turning blurry as the overhead light danced in front of his eyes. Bile started working it’s way up his throat again and HE quickly rolled onto his knees and emptied his stomach contents once again.
kos_mos607
Apr. 18th, 2007 06:54 pm (UTC)
Thanks, it's up.:)
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