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A FIC I JUST HAD TO WRITE DOWM...SORRY

This is a fic written from a very disturbing dream that I have had the past week. It is so not like anything I’ve ever written before, but the dream is hunting me, so I just had to write it down.
I´m sorry…..




He met him at the local bar. Small towns like this always had a local bar where you could pick up what ever you guilty pleasure was.
He spotted the blonde as he walked into the bar, and decided on the spot that it was him that was tonight’s conquest.
He walked to the bar and bought to bottles of beer and walked over to the little table where the blonde was sitting by himself finishing a beer.
He put on all his charm and it didn’t take long before knew that the blonde was coming back with him to his motel room. They talked and laughed and drank and he flirted for all he was worth.
The blonde leaned into him, running his hand though his brown hair and cradling his head. He leaned into the man looked into his blue eyes and then kissed him. He could feel his entire body tingling from the kiss and the closeness of the blonde and when the kiss broke, he asked if it wasn’t time to go somewhere else.

He looks down on the most beautiful sight spread out in front of him on the bed.
It had taken some whisky and a bit of persuasion, but now the blonde is on the bed naked, and with hands and feet tied to the bed posts.
He bends down and kisses the blondes mouth, letting his tongue explore the wet cave of his mouth and hearing the man moan under him. Breaking the kiss he bends over and wrap the remaining silk tie over the blonds mouth like a light gag.
The blonde looks a little confused but he assures him that everything with be so good.
Then the exploring starts.
He runs his hands lightly over the blonde hair, touching, pulling and caressing with his big hands.
The blonde jerks in surprise at the feeling but he shushes him and moves his hands down the neck and over one shoulder. Running his hand down the bicep and underarm, he lets his mouth follow, kissing licking and enjoying.
The blonde lets out another moan or cry, he is not sure what, but he continues to the other arm, hands first then mouth.
He moves so he is straddling the blondes hips and starts the caressing of his chest.
Slow hands over one nipple then the other followed by kissing and sucking, satisfied with the sounds he draws from the blonde through the gag. He moves to kiss the man through the gag, assuring him that this will be so good for him and that he will get him there soon enough.
Then down the torso to the bellybutton, running fingers and mouth over it, looking up at the blonde drinking in the sight in front of him. The blonde is all flustered, trashing on the bed, pulling at the ties around his wrists, sweat and a few tears running down his face, his mouth babbling incoherent words mixed up with ”please” and “Oh my God”.
He tells him how good he is doing and then moves down one thigh and leg, hands followed by kissing and licking, moving down to the foot and over to the other leg.
As he finishes the other leg he looks up at the blonde, seeing the big blue eyes pleading and the mouth working. He leans up and kisses the mouth and the tip of the nose, before going down on the prize of the night.
The blonde is screaming and trashing as his hands move over him and he is coming all over his body.
When he gets his breath back, he gets some towels and cleans himself and the blonde off throwing the towels into his duffle back.
He releases the blondes wrists and feet, pulling the gag off and bend down to kiss the still warm lips.
Then he looks at his work of art on the bed.
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To bad that the marks from the hobby knife, that he had in his hand all the time, will have the blonde bleeding dry with in an hour.

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buzziecat
Oct. 22nd, 2010 07:37 pm (UTC)
Seriously, pippii - if you have more dreams like this, find out if they are a possible side effect of one or more of your medications. Very disturbing.
hugs you
buzzie
pippii
Oct. 22nd, 2010 07:47 pm (UTC)
LOl it is just typical, I dream something remotely sexy and it has to end this way???
Might be teh medications though...
♥hugs back♥
buzziecat
Oct. 22nd, 2010 08:29 pm (UTC)
Check it out to be sure.
I found the dream to be grisly and upsetting.
I wish you happy dreams and ones that are pleasantly sexy. :)
&hearts hugs &hearts
buzzie

Let me add that your writing is very good. I want you to know that that aspect came through. :)

Edited at 2010-10-22 08:30 pm (UTC)
sorsd
Oct. 22nd, 2010 07:40 pm (UTC)
OMG Minx... that was intense...and really well written...wow...i dont know what to say... only that i worry about your dreams... really disturbing and it surprised me big time...HUGS YOU TIGHT... xxx
pippii
Oct. 22nd, 2010 07:48 pm (UTC)
Thanks Dix that means a lot to me..
Yeah I have a sexy dream and it have to end like this!!! Soooo unfair;)
But I´m a little proud that I could surprise you though.
♥huggles back♥
aelia1980
Oct. 22nd, 2010 08:23 pm (UTC)
You dreamt that? Creepy... but it would make a fantastic though very disturbing fanfiction because it was very well written.

No, honestly, I can imagine that this dream is hunting you, it´s very disturbing and if I´d dreamt it, it´d give me the creeps as well. Do you often dream stuff like that?
pippii
Oct. 23rd, 2010 08:39 am (UTC)
Yeah it was a dream and I wrote it the way I remembered it, thinking it could be a good fanfic and a way to get it out...

I don´t have many dreams like that, I think maybe it´s because I´m stressed and nervous right now, and it comes out like that.
I didn´t dream it last night so maybe it´s out now.

♥hugs♥
aelia1980
Oct. 23rd, 2010 01:33 pm (UTC)
Well, I hope it is, sleep is so important and if it is disturbed by creepy dreams like that, that can´t be good.

*hugs*
woman_of_
Oct. 22nd, 2010 08:25 pm (UTC)
Yes, quite disturbing, good to get it out of your system. Totally different from your usual stories.
pippii
Oct. 23rd, 2010 08:40 am (UTC)
I´m glad I got it out and yes, it is so diffrent than my normal fanfic, thanks God;)
cmc1964
Oct. 22nd, 2010 08:44 pm (UTC)
God woman, what have you for dreaming? Hope this dream you have not often. but very well written.
"whatever you take .... take less, or give me something too".
pippii
Oct. 23rd, 2010 08:47 am (UTC)
Luckily I didn´t dream it last night, so I hope I got it out now.
Glad you like the writing though.

LOL like the quote;)

♥hugs♥
pollyspn
Oct. 22nd, 2010 09:02 pm (UTC)
OH!! Just ouch!!

This isn't dream, this is a nightmare!! rsrs

Don't be a sorry, sometimes we've creepy dreams..

But your talent for writing is amazing!!

Brazilian hugs babe...
pippii
Oct. 23rd, 2010 08:45 am (UTC)
It was a nightmare;)
BUt it is gone now, so it was good to get it written down.

Glad you like the writing though, my usual style is described as "sweet, lovely and cute" ;)
So this is diffrent.

♥hugs and kisses♥
burned_phoenix
Oct. 22nd, 2010 09:43 pm (UTC)
that was... interesting? :D but I know those kinds of dreams *g* I can be pretty disturbing too :D

if you wanna talk about anything though, you know I'm here, right? :) *hugs*
pippii
Oct. 23rd, 2010 08:43 am (UTC)
Thank you sweetheart♥
It is disturbing, I think it is because I´m so stressed and nervous right now, it came out that way.
But I didn´t dream it last night, so I think it helped..
♥thank you for being here for me honey♥
Hugs
burned_phoenix
Oct. 24th, 2010 04:31 pm (UTC)
that may be the cause *hugs*

what's weird is, when I have the most disturbing dreams, I feel most rested. like when I'm being chased or there's like a warzone or something. maybe it's a way for the mind to get things worked out.

I'm always here for you! I wish I could do more *hugs*
x_posed_again
Oct. 23rd, 2010 02:01 am (UTC)
Wow girl, I think you need some happy dreams. I hope you feel better now that you got it all out!
pippii
Oct. 23rd, 2010 08:41 am (UTC)
I do need better dreams;)
But yes I didn´t dream it last night, so I think it helped to write it down and get it out.....
babydracky
Oct. 23rd, 2010 10:27 am (UTC)
Well... I have to admit that those are stories that I definitely like to read xD
But I'm not used to you writing them!
Poor little blond!
You have to dream something else for him to make it up ti him!
*HUGS*
pippii
Oct. 24th, 2010 07:46 am (UTC)
Ohh yes I´m sorry for the blonde going down, but that was the dream.
Yes, it is very diffrent from the cute and sweetness that I usually write;)
♥hugs and kisses♥
i_o_r_h_a_e_l
Oct. 24th, 2010 05:21 am (UTC)
Oh wow. So hot. And you dreamed of this?

:D:D
pippii
Oct. 24th, 2010 07:47 am (UTC)
LOL you find it hot, other people think I need help;)
ANd yes it was a dream..
deanvica23
Oct. 29th, 2010 11:06 am (UTC)
i make sometimes weird dreams too. As of real movies with lot of persons with deaths , blood etc. Of this style very sex no.
In your dream he it's jared or sam? that show maybe that the show influence you by the tortures, bleeding. you will like maybe to see evil sam make that or read a book of this style or write in this style bondage.
Nothing bad just of sex a little masochist but it's hot at our age. I read fics in this style evil sam slave dean.
pippii
Oct. 29th, 2010 04:17 pm (UTC)
I´m not sure who the people in the dream were, it was just a little disturping.
I choose to write it down, though I´ve never wriiten anything like this before...
I think I was a bit stressed out at the time, but after I wrote it down and posted it here, the dream went away;)´
♥Hugs
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